Here is the second draft of my film poster, I had gone to my focus group with my previous draft and they had given me a few improvements to make things such as brightening the image and adding the names of directors and actors in the conventional way of a film poster.
After doing this I presented them with this (draft 2) and once more they asked for a few more changes.
- Change the colour in the 'play' from bright green to a more muted colour in order for it to not be so "in your face".
- Make the eye look more 'glassy' and in depth into the lense of the camera.
- Put the cameras name back on the wing of the camera (Which i had previously removed for 'product placement' reasons.) Putting the name of the camera back on the wing will make it clearer what the camera actually is.
After gaining this feedback I am currently working on a third draft of the poster.
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