Saturday, 22 February 2014

Review Page Draft 1


After making this draft of 'The Review' I handed it to my focus group in order to gain constructive criticism to improve my work. Although the over all style and lay out was correct they gave me a number of things to improve.

  • There is usually more than two collumns for text, sometimes 3 or 4.
  • "Although the 'audience review' section is a good idea, it is not a convention of film magazines"
  • Spelling Errors
  • Too many varietys of font
Taking these comments on board I am currently re-drafting the review page.

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